Friday, 27 January 2012

LO3 – Evaluation of Work

        
My comic Vampire Ruling Britain does not follow a typical Vampire storyline, it is a  action love story with a twist following a boy and a girl searching for their place in the world. I chose this story type for my comic as it is a timeless love story that never gets boring. The twist included in the story is one which is not normally seen in a  Vampire story,  in this case instead of the women being in trouble it is the man. This story line might be a step too far for the public due to it being a vampire based comic, sales may not be as strong as many people might be board of the Vampire crazes and what it may stand for in today's society. Critics may describe my comic as being similar to the film Daybreak (2008); this may be because of the theme of vampires ruling the land and humans used as a blood bank. Even though my comic might be compared to this it has a much deeper story of just Vampires, it is about loyalty and making the right decision in life. This meaning brings me onto the positive side of my comic; it is suitable for male and females of all ages as it has gory images, action fight scenes and young love.



My Vampire comic consist of a linear narrative storyline, it is a straight flowing plot with no brakes and interruptions with other stories. My comic is also a closed structure as if follows a typical love story of a character saving another, there are no gaps to fill in with extra information or other sub characters. As the comic is based on a Vampire storyline parallel this comic would be branded as a fantasy/ si-fi as it is set in a un realistic world were Vampires rule the land and Humans are fighting for their lives. The components which male up this comic include opening setting scene of the Vampires tension with the Humans, then there is conflict with the Vampires were Tyler defends his community. The effect of this is him getting captured; the climax includes him meeting Anna. The motivation of the story is him escaping to freedom, and coming back to save Anna to let them have a safe life.



The image construction of my comic is based on drawings and colouring pencil on an A4 sheet of paper. After I completed this stage of the production of the comic I finished editing the drawings and the page format in Adobe Photoshop. The shape of the characters drawn are in the style of American Western, the colour included in the comic as it is the colours of purple, black, green, brown and yellow. These colours are in fitted into the connotations of the characters, showing loyalty and evil.



My comic book does not include any slogans, but the two main caption of the comic on the front of the book tells the reader about the content within the comic. The pictures tell a story about the comic as they show the relationship of the two main characters and it shows the journey they have been on. These images with the title of the book give the audience a quick synopsis to draw the viewer to read the blurb, enticing them to buy the comic which increases sales. The significations of the comic book such as the cultural factors included in the book show the audience that kindness to one other is the most importance aspect of keeping the world livable. If people are not kind in the world it will invite evil in which connotes the reason of the Vampires in the comic. The representation of the this comic is to stay close to one another and respect people to make sure we keep the balance of the world happy, this comic sets a great example on readers of all ages, genders and race as it shows people how to live a better life with the decision you make. In the comic the two main characters make this decision to leave the evil behind and run away to make a better life for them with the kindness they share with each other.



If I had the opportunity to complete this comic again I would do a few thing differently, this would include the quality of the drawings. Even though I tried really hard to make sure that the drawings were to the highest standard I could make them to be, I could have tried to make them even more comic like by experimenting with the shapes of the characters. The other factor I would have change about my comic would have been the process of adapting the chosen storyline. I worked hard on coming up with plenty of different storyline options for the comic book, but what I did not do was come up with different story versions for the vampire idea. If I had completed this I believe my comic storyline would have been more creative and made it stand out from the rest, making sure the storyline would have been adapted to suit the adventurous feel of comic books.

Wednesday, 25 January 2012

Comic Book Development

Vampires Ruling Britain

I started to create my comic book by drawing the pictures I thought up in the creation stage of my storyboard. To draw these photos I got A4 pieces of paper and divided the page into three sections, two small boxes and one bigger one. After drawing all the pictures for the comic books five pages I scanned these images and opened them in Photoshop. After this I edited the drawings to make them more comic like, I did this by changing the pixels and enhancing the colour of the drawings. Once I had finish editing the drawings I cut them individually out of the file into a new one to start developing the comic book pages and putting the drawings in order.
Before I copied and pasted each drawing into the correct pages I created five A4 pages in Photoshop to start creating the backgrounds, I inserted a purple background and boarded it with a clay colour; I finished the background with a decorative gothic drawing. After I inserted the drawings into the correct pages I arranged them to fit a suitable layout and size, I also boarded the drawings with the same colour as the boarded background to have the pages colour coordinated. To develop the comic even more I inserted page numbers and colourful boxes to write the speech text, I inserted this text on top of the selected drawings. After the completion of the main five pages the next step is to create the front and back page.
 Using the same background which has been used on the other pages I inserted two main drawing from the comic and created a heading using the same font as the one I used in the speech boxes. To make the front page more detailed I inserted the drawing which had been used as a background for the other pages, to make the back page I also inserted this drawing and the background colour to start inserting the blurb. I finished this back page off by inserting the bar code and another main drawing from the comic book, after the completion of the comic I saved the Photoshop files to JPEG to allow me to upload these files onto Blogger.

Wednesday, 4 January 2012

Script - Vampires Ruling Britain

Page 1 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Dark scene, Twilight. Long shot of the town.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Mid-shot of the vampire, the woman and the man looking at the other vampires. Both look gaunt and evil.
Woman Vampire: Everybody ready?
Man Vampire: Yes we are ready for attack.
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Long –Shot the Vampires charge at the town trying to break down the doors.
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Close-up. Vampire looking frantic, try’s to climb up the wall of the town.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: A group shot of the Town members. Everybody looking panicked.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Two shot of Tyler and his friend. Thoughtful faces.
Tyler: I can’t let them do this; I have to stop them for the final time.

Page 2 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Long shot. Tyler walks towards the door looking angry. He grabs a weapon on the way.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Long Shot. Vampires and Tyler. Vampires start edging toward him while he holds out his knife.
Vampires: Haha are you going to try and fight us boy.
Tyler: You want to kill my friends and family, now I am going to kill you.
Vampire: Come on and try.
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Long shot. Tyler attacking the vampires.
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Long-shot. Tyler stands tall as the other vampire’s edge closer to him. Two vampires dead on the floor.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: Mid-shot. Vampire grabs Tyler from behind. Tyler struggles to get free.
Vampire: You can’t get free now boy, time to take you back and drain you blood.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Long Shot. Tyler gets lead away from outside the town to the vampire home. Tyler hands are behind his back.

Page 3 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Dark room. Bars on the windows. Tyler is tied to the column in the room. An IV is attached to his body extracting his blood. Tyler starts to wake up.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Close-up. Tyler waking up. He looks around the room to find the blood bag.
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Long- Shot. Anna enters the room looking sympathetic.
Tyler: What are you doing here? There is nothing left to take from me.
Anna: I have been sent to keep an eye on you. To make sure you don’t do anything stupid.
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Two shot. Close-up of Tyler and Anna talking.
Tyler: how can you just stand there and think that what you are doing to this world is right.
Anna: I can’t, I don’t. I am stuck here where else can I go. Nobody expects Vampire no matter what you believe.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: Long shot. Anna and Tyler talking. Anna looks thoughtful.
Tyler: I believe everybody is free to make their own decisions in life. You have a good heart you can live a better life than this.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Close-up of blood bag. Anna rips it off the stand.
Tyler: What are you doing?
Anna: Making my own decisions. I am getting you out of here.

Page 4 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Close up. Anna grabs Tyler’s Hand after ripping the ropes of him. The start to run to the doors.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Two shot. Close –up. Anna and Tyler hide behind a wall dodging away from sight.
Anna: Shhh. Get Back. Vampire
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Long-shot. Anna and Tyler dodge their way out of the building into the open.
Anna: come on: we need to run.
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Mid-shot. Anna and Tyler stand in front of the doors to the town.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: Long Shot. Tyler is left at the door. He watches Anna run back home.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Mid-shot. Back inside the gates Tyler is reunited with his friend.
Edward: How did you get out of their?
Tyler: A Vampire helped me, Anna. She saved my life. I hope she’s ok.

Page 5 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Long-shot. Tyler Lying in his bed. Night time. Gets up sharply.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Long-shot. Tyler running.
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Two Shot. Tyler and Anna. Anna looks surprised to see Tyler.
Anna: Tyler! What are you doing here? Do you want to get caught again?
Tyler: I don’t, but I had to make sure you were ok, please come away with me.
Anna: Where can we go?
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Close-up. Tyler and Anna hands.
Tyler: Anywhere you want?
Anna: Ok.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: Long-Shot. Tyler and Anna running to the distance.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Long-Shot. The End.