Friday, 27 January 2012

LO3 – Evaluation of Work

        
My comic Vampire Ruling Britain does not follow a typical Vampire storyline, it is a  action love story with a twist following a boy and a girl searching for their place in the world. I chose this story type for my comic as it is a timeless love story that never gets boring. The twist included in the story is one which is not normally seen in a  Vampire story,  in this case instead of the women being in trouble it is the man. This story line might be a step too far for the public due to it being a vampire based comic, sales may not be as strong as many people might be board of the Vampire crazes and what it may stand for in today's society. Critics may describe my comic as being similar to the film Daybreak (2008); this may be because of the theme of vampires ruling the land and humans used as a blood bank. Even though my comic might be compared to this it has a much deeper story of just Vampires, it is about loyalty and making the right decision in life. This meaning brings me onto the positive side of my comic; it is suitable for male and females of all ages as it has gory images, action fight scenes and young love.



My Vampire comic consist of a linear narrative storyline, it is a straight flowing plot with no brakes and interruptions with other stories. My comic is also a closed structure as if follows a typical love story of a character saving another, there are no gaps to fill in with extra information or other sub characters. As the comic is based on a Vampire storyline parallel this comic would be branded as a fantasy/ si-fi as it is set in a un realistic world were Vampires rule the land and Humans are fighting for their lives. The components which male up this comic include opening setting scene of the Vampires tension with the Humans, then there is conflict with the Vampires were Tyler defends his community. The effect of this is him getting captured; the climax includes him meeting Anna. The motivation of the story is him escaping to freedom, and coming back to save Anna to let them have a safe life.



The image construction of my comic is based on drawings and colouring pencil on an A4 sheet of paper. After I completed this stage of the production of the comic I finished editing the drawings and the page format in Adobe Photoshop. The shape of the characters drawn are in the style of American Western, the colour included in the comic as it is the colours of purple, black, green, brown and yellow. These colours are in fitted into the connotations of the characters, showing loyalty and evil.



My comic book does not include any slogans, but the two main caption of the comic on the front of the book tells the reader about the content within the comic. The pictures tell a story about the comic as they show the relationship of the two main characters and it shows the journey they have been on. These images with the title of the book give the audience a quick synopsis to draw the viewer to read the blurb, enticing them to buy the comic which increases sales. The significations of the comic book such as the cultural factors included in the book show the audience that kindness to one other is the most importance aspect of keeping the world livable. If people are not kind in the world it will invite evil in which connotes the reason of the Vampires in the comic. The representation of the this comic is to stay close to one another and respect people to make sure we keep the balance of the world happy, this comic sets a great example on readers of all ages, genders and race as it shows people how to live a better life with the decision you make. In the comic the two main characters make this decision to leave the evil behind and run away to make a better life for them with the kindness they share with each other.



If I had the opportunity to complete this comic again I would do a few thing differently, this would include the quality of the drawings. Even though I tried really hard to make sure that the drawings were to the highest standard I could make them to be, I could have tried to make them even more comic like by experimenting with the shapes of the characters. The other factor I would have change about my comic would have been the process of adapting the chosen storyline. I worked hard on coming up with plenty of different storyline options for the comic book, but what I did not do was come up with different story versions for the vampire idea. If I had completed this I believe my comic storyline would have been more creative and made it stand out from the rest, making sure the storyline would have been adapted to suit the adventurous feel of comic books.

Wednesday, 25 January 2012

Comic Book Development

Vampires Ruling Britain

I started to create my comic book by drawing the pictures I thought up in the creation stage of my storyboard. To draw these photos I got A4 pieces of paper and divided the page into three sections, two small boxes and one bigger one. After drawing all the pictures for the comic books five pages I scanned these images and opened them in Photoshop. After this I edited the drawings to make them more comic like, I did this by changing the pixels and enhancing the colour of the drawings. Once I had finish editing the drawings I cut them individually out of the file into a new one to start developing the comic book pages and putting the drawings in order.
Before I copied and pasted each drawing into the correct pages I created five A4 pages in Photoshop to start creating the backgrounds, I inserted a purple background and boarded it with a clay colour; I finished the background with a decorative gothic drawing. After I inserted the drawings into the correct pages I arranged them to fit a suitable layout and size, I also boarded the drawings with the same colour as the boarded background to have the pages colour coordinated. To develop the comic even more I inserted page numbers and colourful boxes to write the speech text, I inserted this text on top of the selected drawings. After the completion of the main five pages the next step is to create the front and back page.
 Using the same background which has been used on the other pages I inserted two main drawing from the comic and created a heading using the same font as the one I used in the speech boxes. To make the front page more detailed I inserted the drawing which had been used as a background for the other pages, to make the back page I also inserted this drawing and the background colour to start inserting the blurb. I finished this back page off by inserting the bar code and another main drawing from the comic book, after the completion of the comic I saved the Photoshop files to JPEG to allow me to upload these files onto Blogger.

Wednesday, 4 January 2012

Script - Vampires Ruling Britain

Page 1 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Dark scene, Twilight. Long shot of the town.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Mid-shot of the vampire, the woman and the man looking at the other vampires. Both look gaunt and evil.
Woman Vampire: Everybody ready?
Man Vampire: Yes we are ready for attack.
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Long –Shot the Vampires charge at the town trying to break down the doors.
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Close-up. Vampire looking frantic, try’s to climb up the wall of the town.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: A group shot of the Town members. Everybody looking panicked.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Two shot of Tyler and his friend. Thoughtful faces.
Tyler: I can’t let them do this; I have to stop them for the final time.

Page 2 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Long shot. Tyler walks towards the door looking angry. He grabs a weapon on the way.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Long Shot. Vampires and Tyler. Vampires start edging toward him while he holds out his knife.
Vampires: Haha are you going to try and fight us boy.
Tyler: You want to kill my friends and family, now I am going to kill you.
Vampire: Come on and try.
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Long shot. Tyler attacking the vampires.
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Long-shot. Tyler stands tall as the other vampire’s edge closer to him. Two vampires dead on the floor.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: Mid-shot. Vampire grabs Tyler from behind. Tyler struggles to get free.
Vampire: You can’t get free now boy, time to take you back and drain you blood.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Long Shot. Tyler gets lead away from outside the town to the vampire home. Tyler hands are behind his back.

Page 3 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Dark room. Bars on the windows. Tyler is tied to the column in the room. An IV is attached to his body extracting his blood. Tyler starts to wake up.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Close-up. Tyler waking up. He looks around the room to find the blood bag.
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Long- Shot. Anna enters the room looking sympathetic.
Tyler: What are you doing here? There is nothing left to take from me.
Anna: I have been sent to keep an eye on you. To make sure you don’t do anything stupid.
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Two shot. Close-up of Tyler and Anna talking.
Tyler: how can you just stand there and think that what you are doing to this world is right.
Anna: I can’t, I don’t. I am stuck here where else can I go. Nobody expects Vampire no matter what you believe.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: Long shot. Anna and Tyler talking. Anna looks thoughtful.
Tyler: I believe everybody is free to make their own decisions in life. You have a good heart you can live a better life than this.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Close-up of blood bag. Anna rips it off the stand.
Tyler: What are you doing?
Anna: Making my own decisions. I am getting you out of here.

Page 4 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Close up. Anna grabs Tyler’s Hand after ripping the ropes of him. The start to run to the doors.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Two shot. Close –up. Anna and Tyler hide behind a wall dodging away from sight.
Anna: Shhh. Get Back. Vampire
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Long-shot. Anna and Tyler dodge their way out of the building into the open.
Anna: come on: we need to run.
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Mid-shot. Anna and Tyler stand in front of the doors to the town.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: Long Shot. Tyler is left at the door. He watches Anna run back home.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Mid-shot. Back inside the gates Tyler is reunited with his friend.
Edward: How did you get out of their?
Tyler: A Vampire helped me, Anna. She saved my life. I hope she’s ok.

Page 5 (6 Panels)
Panel 1
Artist Notes: Long-shot. Tyler Lying in his bed. Night time. Gets up sharply.
Panel 2
Artist Notes: Long-shot. Tyler running.
Panel 3
Artist Notes: Two Shot. Tyler and Anna. Anna looks surprised to see Tyler.
Anna: Tyler! What are you doing here? Do you want to get caught again?
Tyler: I don’t, but I had to make sure you were ok, please come away with me.
Anna: Where can we go?
Panel 4
Artist Notes: Close-up. Tyler and Anna hands.
Tyler: Anywhere you want?
Anna: Ok.
Panel 5
Artist Notes: Long-Shot. Tyler and Anna running to the distance.
Panel 6
Artist Notes: Long-Shot. The End.

Monday, 12 December 2011

Comic Book Considerations

Legal Issues

Copyright - The legal problems you can encounter when making a comic is copyright issues, copyright infringement and theft of ideas or stories. You can register a copyright online to protect your work from have ideas stolen from it, but copyright comes at a cost. The payment for the copyright depends on whether the work is published or unpublished; the date of publication can also be a consideration when coming up with the payment for copyright.

I will make sure my comic will not break any copyright laws by checking for any similar
stories to mine which are copyrighted before I publish my own. I will make sure I search for any other comics for stories related to vampires, I will look at the story structure of the comic book making sure there are no similar storylines to mine which may interrupt the publishing of my comic book Vampires Ruling Britain.
Vampire Comics
Dracula the Graphic Novel: Original Text


This is not similar to my comic due to is being set in the times of Queen Victoria, a dated comic inspired by horror stories of Frankenstein. This comic looks at the monstrous side of vampires, the side where they do not feel for human life and will do anything for the most exciting kill. Even though my comic has blood thirsty vampires, they still care deep inside; the vampires have been outlawed by the humans for so many years they feel it is time to get their revenge on the world.

Planet of Vampires # 1 (Original American COMIC

This comic is not similar to my comic as it is a sci-fi take on vampires and the world population; the main characters in this film are a group of 5 astronauts, they had been returned to Earth from the Aries VII mission to Mars that was launched in 2005 to look for life forms. While they were away a nuclear war broke out, and the survivors have been split between two groups — human savages and high-tech vampires. The comic carries a theme of surprise as the main characters have not seen the build up to this destruction. While my comic, the main human characters have witness the traumatic experienced the destruction and their loved one dying in front of their eyes, for this they have grown stronger as a human race.

Topic of comic
The topic of any stories written has to be analyses thoroughly before any publication; this is because the comic book may cause offence to somebody due to wrong representation or the manor of the writing.

In my comic the topics which could cause concern is the topic of vampires and the talk of blood. The way I will manage these concerning the topics by making sure I put an age certification suitable for the reader, protecting the younger generation from content that may cause them distress.

Marvel Rating System,  June 2005

-          ALL AGES
-          A Appropriate for age 9 and up.
-          T+ SUGGESTED FOR TEEN AND UP
-          PARENTAL ADVISORY
-          MAX: EXPLICIT CONTENT
I would rate my comic as a T+, I have decided this because of the comic including blood content and violence content which is not suitable for children aged 9.
Resources
Publishing – Publishing your comic includes two key companies a distributing company and a printing company. You need to find a company who suits your needs, this may include finding a printing company who will print your comic at a good price per unit and how will also help give you on how to distribute the comic books local stores or online companies, this information will save you time and money.
Publishing Companies


-          Trafford Publishing, http://www.trafford.com/
-          Lu Lu, https://www.lulu.com/
-          Comic Vine Publications, http://www.comicvine.com/london-night-studios/57-591/
-          Warpton, http://www.warpton.co.uk/
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Printing – There are two fundamental types of printing, is Black and White and Four-Colour many low budget comics print in black and white to save the company money and to lower the price of the comic for the buyer, attracting more people to feeling they can afford to buy it a fun read.

Printing Companies

-          Kodak, http://graphics.kodak.com/
-          Atlantis Studios, http://www.atlantisstudios.net/comics_custom_printers.htm
-          Wedo Comics, http://www.wedocomics.com
-          Pulse Printing, http://www.pulseprint.co.uk/products/comic_book_printing/ 
Black and white line art requires only a ‘line-shot’; this is done by a camera burning the plates for the printing presses. Black and white lines art is very cheap in pre-press production, but grayscale artwork requires scanning to prepare it so that the plates can be burnt. Colour artwork is the most expensive in the printing business as it requires scanning and trapping, in addition to separation into CMYK a four color film; finally each page must be separated into its component Cyan, Yellow, Magenta, and Black to complete the printing process.
Cost –  the cost of make a comic book can depended on many different items such as choosing the right company to help you make it, what printing package you choose and the way you distribute the work.
Audience, Target Market The Target audience for my comic includes a range of people such as people who are interested in vampires but want a change in story from the typical romance stories. The comic fits in well the vampire market including Twilight and The Vampire Diaries, but with the additional story line of the state of the world and the situation the two main character

Cartoon Publication

I am going to create my comic book Vampires Ruling Britain in a magazine comic strip format. I have chosen this format to publish my comic in because it makes the comic more accessible for the public as you don’t have to be a comic lover to read it.

Newspaper Comic Research
Garfield

Published 12th December 2011, by Jim Davis, The Seattle Times

This Garfield comic strip is updated and distributed every day in The Seattle Times, US.  Each comic strip varies in size depending on how much dialogue is included; the strips are printed in colour to make sure the audience develops an instant connection with Garfield as he is widely known for his distinctive colourings. The comic strip mainly focuses on the interactions among Garfield, Jon, and Odie including some recurring minor characters.

Graphic Narrative Book Research


Ultimate Spider-Man Volume 1: Power and Responsibility: Power and Responsibility
Published 1st June 2001, by Bill Jemas (Author), Brian Michael Bendis (Author), Mark Bagley (Illustrator), Brian Michael Bendis (Author) Visit Amazon's Brian Michael Bendis PageFind all the books, read about the author, and more.See search results for this author name Are you an Author? Learn about Author Central Mavel Comics

Spiderman Graphic Novels are printed in volumes; once another Spiderman novel is completed a new volume is printed in a book format and distributed to book shops and online stores such as Amazon. The comics are printing in pages about 200; the structure of the number of drawings per page can change depending on how important the shot is in the story line. These comics are printed in colour, attracting the buyer to the front cover using stand out colours of red and blue, this lets the audience no instantly that it is a super hero comic as these colours are widely known to be connected with Superman and Spiderman.

Magazine Comic Research

Billy Wizz, Beano

Published 10th December 2011, by Beno, D.C. Thomson & Co

Billy Wizz is a comic strip published in Beano Magazine realised every month packed full of different jokes and a range of different new comic strips. The comic strips are printed in colour and fill one page of the magazine; the numbers of shots per comic strip can vary depending on how much background detail the artist wants to include which can help the story progress further. The stories progress every magazine to hook the readers to buy the next issue to find out what their favourite comic characters are doing next.

After researching the different publishing options for comic, it has backed up my decision to publish my comic in a Graphic Narrative book. This is because of how pacific my target audience is, publishing my book in a magazine or newspaper my lead my comic astray as this may mean I have to change parts of the story to adjust to their target audience. I feel if I publish my comic in a book this will help the readers understand the story completely, giving them a chance to understand the idea put across in the novel, letting them decide if they would like to read the next novel in the series.

Typography

The font I am going to use in my comic is called Valdemar from urbanfonts.com.
This font suits my comic book very well as they both share a vampire theme, this font is clear and easy to read but is also decorative and a gothic assents. This fount will be included in the heading and in the text which will be included with the pictures.


Friday, 9 December 2011

Character Profile

Tyler


Clothing:

T-shirt – Blue
The blue represents his importance in the story line, it also shows his power as he controls he path in life.

Trousers – Brown
The brown trousers his traditional values to defend his loved one in the face of danger.

Gem Necklace – Yellow
The yellow in his necklace represent the hope of a better world, how he might be the one to restore the safety.

Hair:

Black - Short
Black in his hair helps create more detail to the character, showing their importance in the plot as it creates more personality.


Anna












 

Clothing:

Long dress in velvet – Brown
Her long dress and in the color of brown shows her traditional values, treating people with kindness.

Fabric belt – Purple
The purple shows her magical powers, being strong and fast.

Gem Necklace – Green
The green shows how Anna is a peaceful character; she does not embrace her inner monster of being a Vampire.

Hair:

Blonde –Long
He shade of yellow shows a glimmer of hope in the destruction of the world and she maybe the one to solve the problem, as she is a powerful character.